Universal Law

It’s a Universal Law

The person you love best

Above all things

Can never feel the same

About you


And of course

The one who loves you most

Is not the one

That you can feel the same

Way about


So people bounce

Against each other

Like excited molecules

All the time


Attracted to each other

Sometimes repelled

Love as expended



What a waste it is

Of love, emotion, energy

Why can’t we just




  1. Beautifully constructed words Denise – heartfelt and potent through and through.

  2. Thank you so much! It was one of the ones that fell out of my poor brain pretty fully-formed.

  3. planet · · Reply

    Sadly truthful, beautifully truthful

    1. Thank you!

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